Tuesday, 23 June 2009

Script

I wrote this script for the narrative to make it authentic so that the actors had something to say from a rehearsed script rather than saying something off the top of thier heads.
We also decided to give the characters names instead of calling them girl and boy.

Part 1

(shot 14) Drew - (shouts at Elliot) "I should have never thought of you"

(shot 16) Elliot- (pushes Drew away, then pulls her back towards him) "You need to make up your mind"

(shot 17) Drew - "But i don't know what i want "

Part 2

(shot 19) (Drew talking with friends, Elliot walks past)

(Drew chatting about a party thats coming up, able to improvise )

(shot 20) (Elliot walks past and calls over to Drew)

(shot 21) (Drew turns to Elliot)

Part 3

(shot 29)Drew - "I don't want to talk to you, i'm with my friends"

Elliot - "You need to tell me if you have made up your mind"

(shot 30) Drew -" Your not (pushes Elliot) listening (pulls him back)"

(shot31) Drew - "I HATE YOU!"

(Elliot tries to grab Drew as she walks off)

Part 4

(shot 37) (Drew goes crazy at Elliot and tries to slap him, but he blocks it, able to improvise aregument)
(Elliot is trying to calm Drew down)

Part 5

(shot 40) (Drew and Elliot still arguing)

(shot 41) (Still arguing, Drew has clamed down)

(shot 47) (Drew and Elliot walk away from each other)

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