For the narrative, we have written a script for the actors to perform and to make it easier to act, we need to add more stage directions for them so we get the desired narrative. The entire narrative needs to accurately timed
Shot Number - Shot Type - Time Shot Starts (Some shots don't have times) - Action
Script Re-edit
Shot 14 - Two Shot - [1.12] - Drew: [Shouts at Elliot] I should have never thought of you.
[This makes Elliot angry and he starts to pace, Drew tries to make him reply]
Shot 15 - Two Shot - [1.16] - Elliot: [He turns to Drew and pushes Drew away, angrily, then pulls her back towards him]
Shot 16 - Head and Shoulder Shot - [1.18] - You need to make up your mind.
Shot 17 - Head and Shoulder Shot - [1.20] - Drew: But I don't know what I want.
Shot 19 - Wide Shot - [Drew talking with friends, Elliot walks past, he's looking down at the floor but then sees Drew sat down. He wants to reconcile with her. Drew chatting about a party that's coming up, able to improvise]
Shot 20 - Mid Shot/Head and Shoulder Shot - [Elliot turns to look at Drew and calls her name]
Shot 21 - Mid Shot/Head and Shoulder Shot - [Drew turns to Elliot]
Shot 24 - Two Shot - [1.41] - [Elliot walks over to her as she stands up and speaks to him at the same time] - Drew: You're not the one I believe in with God as my witness
Shot 29 - Two Shot - [2.08] - Drew: And I don't want to talk to you, I'm with my friends.
Shot 29 also - Elliot: You need to tell me if you have made up your mind.
Shot 30 - Two Shot - [2.14] - Drew: [Angry because Elliot isn't listening to her] Elliot, you're not [pushes Elliot] listening [pulls him back]
Shot 31 - Head and Shoulder Shot - [2.18] - Drew: I HATE YOU! [Turns away from Elliot]
Shot 32 - Two Shot - [2.21] - [Elliot tries to grab Drew as she walks off]
Shot 37 - Two Shot - [2.55] - [Drew has turned back to Elliot and goes crazy at Elliot and tries to slap him, but he blocks it, able to improvise argument. Elliot is trying to calm Drew down through her yelling at him] This will be slowed down to exaggerate the mood of the scene in the final edit.
Shot 40 - Two Shot - [3.18] - [Drew and Elliot still arguing]
Shot 43 - Two Shot - [3.30] - [Still arguing, Drew has calmed down but now Elliot is more aggitated but they're verging on finishing their relationship]
Shot 47 - Two Shot - [3.51] - [Drew and Elliot walk away from each other. The couple have broken up and are parting ways]
Tuesday, 7 July 2009
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